Had great fortune
Turned the world around
Made everyone dance at my beat
Didn't get a single wound
Had everything I'd dreamed of
Lived life the way I'd always wanted
Turned my back on the crowd waiting.
Only to find out....
I'd lost myself!
Author notes
Don't lose your existence for the materialistic things!
A contest entry
- PIF Image Inspired...Take it where you will by jcat.
900 points, ended January 14, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excellent take on the prompt!! We do tend to lose ourselves in todays society!! A gentle reminder to be true to ourselves!! Well done and thank you for your entry
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very nice and i like that there are suttle depths in this. there is a lot of feeling that in can feel as very much relating to the picture. very well done good luck in the contest
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Nice...well conceived and articulated
Well done and good luck
Simon
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