you walk in the door
bitter cold ...
your eyes look away
as fast as they looked
Not a single kiss
yet your so close I can
feel your baited breath
it graces my nose with scents
of sweet red wine
We briefly touch
I can smell your smell
It lingers ..
what happened to us
No more red roses or romance
no more sweet melodies
Our song has gone flat
We don't tremble with passions
anymore
like a drunken one night stand
We make love,
alone ...
When I look at you
I can still see
what we once had
have you forgotten
me?
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Lost love, what once was but is now lost....
Comments
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Thank you so much for your comment! Yes I agree lost love is such a rough rough road. This was written from the heart, very true words here.
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Goodbyes are very painful, expecially if you have no idea if you have been forgotten in the mess or not. This is a beautiful write. I can relate to this.
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thank you so much for your comment!
I appreciate your kind words.
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Ohhh I loved this so much!! Its beautiful and shows how a broken heart can feel!!
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thank you for your sweet comment. appreciated!
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nice loved the ending! good job
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