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Underneath

Storm clouds brew within your eyes
Blues dwell inside your cries

Darkness laughs as you tiptoe through the night
As a chilling wind blows shadows through a dim light

Echoes of fear crush upon my  soul
As a whisper tickles within the black hole

Underneath the icy tears
Lies all your frozen fears

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  • myrataal silver member
    January 21
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    Yes ...

    not even tears can tell. Not even eyes wet can share. Not even, not even ... words.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 18

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    excellent~

    Well
    This was written sometime back
    But your poems are always excellent
    The flow and rhyme in this one is perfect
    Wish you were here more I miss ya
    Love this even tho it's sad
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Kalexi
      January 19
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      thank you,Susan. No, I just wrote this one; I'm really rusty.

      Hugs
      Karen


  • Scarlett silver member
    January 15

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    I am so happy you are back.
    It's as if you've been gone for ages and I can still completely relate to your words.
    I've missed you so much...I do hope all is well for you!
    I'm almost done with college now :-)

    -30-


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 14

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    Nice sis,

    It's been along time since you've penned anything here, and I am so happy to read your works once again. Good work, and keep on keeping on sis~

    -Timothy

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