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No more Lies :((

For all the love I once felt


It overwhelmed my heart till I nearly cried


But now that your gone...

 

I could care less for I guess it is just for the best


For now you cannot hurt me, and you cannot kill me,


And as I say this my life just spirals by


And there are No more games no more cuts


Nothing at all but my dieing trust

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  • lil00miss00me
    February 6
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    yay this is so gd 3 simle claps for u x


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    January 24

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    I love this. It's so full of emotion, and I know a lot of people can relate. I think your very talented. I love how you worded. Keep it up hun. :]


  • Sadpuppet
    January 20
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    i know how you feel...it sux being so tormented by someone you love...you just think they love you back until they abuse you and just disappear, then you realize you don't even need them...i hope that makes any sense. this is a beautiful poem, i love it! well done

  • wow amazing..
    can totally relate to it.
    great emotions..so true..

  • wow. its a very intense write i like how you've expressed yourself so well here its great. keep penning

  • i love it its amazing. kinda sad, but sometimes that makes the best kind of poetry!


  • love bleeds
    January 7
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    wow this is great and very sad but strong love it

  • Awe. this is really deep but quite good as well.
    I know how you feel because I can relate to this so well and good job with this hope you keep writing


  • XxXemoXxX13
    January 7
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    wow
    its really good
    ur a great writer
    im adding u 2 my favorites


  • bluestoneangel
    January 7
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    deep write!

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