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In The Winter Of Your Love.



In the winter of our love,
my limbs grew barren
from your many leaves,
driven from my hopes
by your full blown anger.

I watched the fall progress,
till I was stripped
of all dignity,
the multicolored beauty
of your passion swept away.

Inconsequential things
that matter little now
since I am bare without you
and your are vanished in the wind.

Long after you have been raked
over my soul and and relegated
to the remains of what was
there will be buds of hope emerging,
for a new love to grow in your place,
but the roots run deep.  


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number 7 prompt photo....
poem by- Artis

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 7

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely fantastic piece. Superb imagery and flow, and is such an amazing take on the prompt! Bravo! Great job and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • heartnsoul
    January 7

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    Why is it that the pain of losing love runs deeper than the love itself?
    I agree with the other comments, its the hope that does it for me. I do believe your words are a wonderful marriage to the graphic. Although, on their own, one can feel the cold wind blow through the soul.
    Michelle


  • Beverlynohime
    January 7

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    This is beautiful! Every word is so exquisitely portrayed! I really enjoyed this piece! I wish you luck in the contest! I'm thinking GOLD.


  • Denerica
    January 7
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    This is brilliant...scorned but yet know there is hope. Blessings.