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My true story

Echoes from the distant past
Bring tears of joy to my eyes
For I found truest love at last
With gentle touch and softest sighs
She touched my heart and I did fall
Head over heels I answered her call.

Many paths we may have crossed
The skein of life so cruel with pride
But never were we once lost,
As through the maze we stride.
Hand in hand, hearts beat as one,
Life together, under the same sun.

Now she is my wife and I love her dear
She makes each morning sun shine.
And we live our life with no fear
Through rain and wind and weather fine.
To my wife Jacqui, the love of my life,
Forever my sweetheart, forever my wife.

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This is for my wife...Jacqui.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    February 3

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    your inspiration has filled this reader with warmth.  your rhyme is so effortless...again, your words have moved me very much.  Love, Lane


  • Tiffany Turner
    January 13

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    aw this is a really cute write...i love it...keep up the good work....thank you for entering my contest...good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 7
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    Aww.. that's just lovely! I hope she saw this. Very sweet indeed!


  • StarEyes
    January 7

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    Bubs,

    I am sure this touched Jacqui's heart as deeply as it did mine! This is truly beautiful! Such the romantic... Hey think you can give my husband some lessons. I swear he don't know the meaning of the word!

    Anyways, this is just about the sweetest thing I have read in like 'forever'

    Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Nevermore

    Nyetta

  • Word poet
    January 7

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    This is a great poem I to have a love in my life would never do here wrong its amazing how love makes us feel and when were without it then we feel lost almost like a part of our selves is missing you did agood job.. I could feel how much you love your wife..


  • Hikari Lady
    January 7

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    Woooow!!! The closing line made me shiver with the deep emtions and love. Beautifully written, honestly penned.
    Good luck to both of you in life and good luck to you in the contest.

    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Nickelspring gold member
    January 7
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    Beautiful!

    I love this poem! Its refreshing. The rhyme scheme is subtle. A great write

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