6 o'clock in the mornin,
tossin and turnin,
this just aint workin,
the teachers are smirken.
I feel like dyin,
inside I'm cryin,
they got me writin,
now I'm recitin.
This is retarded,
my I-pod needs guarded,
my essay's discarded
I'm disregarded.
If school is a haven,
why are kids misbehavin?
my future's not pavin,
and people are hatin.
Grades just keep droppin,
mom says I'm floppin,
I wanna go shoppin,
but instead I'm moppin.
I don't know what's worse,
school's more diverse,
at home I'm coerce,
life feels like a curse.
Homework is piling,
as I keep on fake smiling,
I can't keep relying,
on things so beguiling.
If school is a haven,
why are kids misbehavin?
my future's not pavin,
and people are hatin.
I'm done with this stuff,
I've had enough,
it's just one big bluff,
that's just way too rough.
Don't drown me in work,
I'll go berserk,
teacher's a jerk,
I just wanna smirk.
Have fun once in awhile,
'cause hey, that's my style,
you with me? then smile,
no longer hostile.
If school is a haven,
why are kids misbehavin?
my future's not pavin,
so instead I'm skatin.
Author notes
Lol...yeah, just a tad bad in my opinion, maybe more than a tad, but hey, ur decision about it all. kinda ironic that i'm at school right now...
A contest entry
- Rap (Not quite music and not quite poetry, but who cares) by Shya.
1350 points, ended January 10, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is funny, i like the rhythm of it
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heck, it's not bad at all, what is your AN talkin' about? I found myself laughin' out loud sometime in the middle of this. This is awesome... everything from the rhyming to the rhythm that I can feel and of course the omitted G's. =) Thanks for entering!
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What a fun read! But as a teacher....... I have to say, you got a lot of good points in this one! I had to chuckle with you on this one! It is a fun read, and well, I am loving it!
Best of luck in this contest!
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i like this. i hear rap all the time at my school, but this is really good. keep it up alright?
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