Just another girl....
From another school....
Who had the courage to love you....
I remember when I met you,
and the day we became friends.
I remember all of the little things,
we'd say or do, The little things,
that brought me even closer to you.
Your smile brightened my days,
while your hugs ran my fears away.
With your hand in mine I knew
everything would be fine.
I wanted more than anything
to be with you...
Just another girl....
From another school....
Who had the courage to love you...
After all we'd been through,
could it be true?
That you'd fallen in love with
me? And me with you?
I wanted you to know
but how could I show you?
I was nervous....
Scared of what you would think.
Would you laugh at my honesty?
Could you handle the truth?
I was afraid of becoming,
Just another girl....
From another school....
But in the end the truth came out.
You told me you loved me,
and chivalry reigned through.
You showed me you loved me
and you knew I'd fallen in
love with you.
The day came where we said our goodbyes.
You kissed me lightly and dried the tears
I did cry.
I held your hand in mine and said the words
I'd tried to say time and time again.
There comes a time when our beginning is our end.
A time where you and I were once more than just friends.
I know my heart will bring me to you once again.
As you stepped on the bus.
Silently I cried,
For that day I became....
Just another girl....
From another school....
Who had the courage to tell you she loved you....
Author notes
.....I'm just another girl....
.....From another school....
.....Who loved him with all my heart....
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Beautifully written and filled with raw emotion and honesty : ) -
this is a very sad poem, but one that i loved immensely!! keep up the good work and good luck!
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After all we'd been through,
could it be true?
That you'd fallen in love with
me? And me with you?
my fav lines!!!!
i cant help reading it again & agai -
please write the username in ur AN.i would like to add u to my favs
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OMG!!!
you have spkn ezcatly waht ive wanetdt osay in my poems !!..:'(
this is so beeautiful !!!
this is one of my favs.....
icant tel u how much this poem means to me right noww.w....
:'( u made me cry ! congratulations !!!
good luck -
I love this...
I like how you did the repetitive thing. It's something I personally struggle with and I enjoy reading poetry where it is done effectively.
Keep writing =] -
Baby girl! It's so sad. :[
And I know that you're going through a really tough time. Remember that all your friends are here for you no matter what.
Love you sis!
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