Forever is no sacrifice
to a lonely heart,
forever is just suffering
for those who are apart.
How I long to touch you
through time so unrelenting,
weeping to the stars above-
the ears to my lamenting.
I know that you’re still out there
my heart can’t say goodbye,
somewhere you are waiting
beneath the same vast sky.
Maybe twenty lifetimes
before we meet again,
but even through the ages
our bond it shall remain.
Patience to be my virtue
on this long and lonely road,
as I journey down the path
where love once leapt and flowed.
So darling, I must leave now
set out for pastures new,
never to forget my vow-
I will always love you.
In a list
A contest entry
- I'd Give Up Forever To Touch You by PastelMoons.
1000 points, ended January 20, 2009, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aww Doll, this is beautiful...
Fantastic take on the prompt...
Loving, timeless & heartfelt...
Wonderful rhyme scheme with a sweet, compelling narrative that was absolutely stunning...
Keep up the good work & good luck in the contest...
Well done!!!
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Nothing holds the power and sadness of a love poem that does not have a happy ending. You took the prompt and embraced it composing this gripping piece. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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This is so beautiful!!!
Thank you so much for
entering
~Pastel
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Oh honey! This sounds like me!
It really does sound like something I would say, but, yet for some reasons I can not... You did great on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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