'Twas the night before Christmas
and all through the house
Not a creature was stirring,
not even a mouse
'Cuz the cat had pounced on him
and tore him apart -
Ate his mouse intestines
and chewed up his heart.
Kitty thought he heard sleigh bells,
which made him take pause-
He stopped daintily licking
the blood from his claws.
Must be Santa, thought kitty
(that quite clever cat)
'Cuz nobody else climbs down
the chimney like that.
Indeed it was ol' Santa,
so jolly and fat
With a huge load of presents
and all for the cat
"Wow, the best Christmas ever!"
Kitty thought with a purr,
Then he coughed up a hairball
and shed some more fur.
Author notes
kinda late
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes Galore/no gold yet by piccola.
400 points, ended January 19, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me if u liked it!
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Cute! Poor mousie -
ya!
its hard to believe, I agree with lindaburns, it the magic of words and thought that you know so well,
keep up the good work
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You are eleven years old, huh? Subject matter aside, this would be good even if an adult had written or heavily edited it. Keep up the good work.
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lol, everyone says that im pretty good for 11. I'm really lucky they have the rhyming tool otherwise it would be pretty hard for me.
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lol
good write keep on penning
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I'm not too fond of the parts about blood and eating the mouse's insides but that's just my opinion. You certainly are a creative writer. Keep up the good work.
Brian
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