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A little dream...

Shooting stars bounce off your eyes, and mandolins stir cool bliss,
Another warm and tight embrace, sealed with a sizzling kiss.
                    The scent of your perfume pervades the meeting of our hearts,
                    The moon, the stars, and all our senses play their perfect parts.
Side by side, and hand in hand, let's while away the night,
In music made for us alone, and songs of pure delight.
                    While dreams of dreams immersed in shoreless waves of fantasy,
                    Play magic on our heartstrings with the sweetest ecstasy.
Take me to the heaven that I see within your eyes,
Let's hitch a ride upon the stars that shoot across the skies.
                    Let's dance in tune in graceful steps among the shifting clouds,
                    Let's lose ourselves in selfless love among the hidden crowds.
Let's watch the setting of the moon, the rising of the sun,
Till the morning when, at last, our little dream is done...

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  • written-in-ink
    January 12
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    wow

    i like
    does what the prompt says

    nice job
    =]]]

  • piccola silver member
    January 10
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    read (again) I'm afraid if I remove the 2nd one it will also remove the 1st.