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in phlosophical parlance-----------

With hopes and desires
escalating to new heights
my mind flies high into the sky
like a colourful kite drawing all attention

Fate sometimes acts like a current pole
and neatly catches hold of the kite
and entangles  it in zig -zag manner
not allowing us to clear the  tight knots
with a fear of possible electrocution

All my goals get shattered i, there after in minutes
thus making me to loose my track on all paths
in  the colourful tastes of my aesthetic life
quite truly in phlosophical parlance

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    January 8

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    Ahd..very beautifully you are mapping the truths and mapping its spheres around the words of a intimate poetry..well done...