I never looked up
I never saw your face
I never felt your skin
I never smelt your scent
except
I heard your voice
I heard your wisdom
now
I am blessed
I am alive
forever
I will search
I will find
My Angel
Author notes
'let it rock' by geckogirl
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nice!! creative!! pretty!!
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ta thanks for dropping in....
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i meant u have to put 'let it rock' and ur username in ur AN
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rocking angels l.o.l
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lol good luck !
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please don delte it from the contest !
i reli liked it !
just enter in ur rules ! -
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I have never watched Prison Break before... so I wouldn't no what to write... but thank-you... I will follow the rules next time l.o.l
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helloe !
this is anagha
i lovd it friend ! but u havent followed the rules !
please read
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no I didn't sorry... a bit brain dead today will delete.....
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You have a great flair for short, reflective pieces. Another one that held my attention and had me nodding along with it. My fav lines were:
"I heard your voice
I heard your wisdom
now
I am blessed
I am alive"
AsIThink...
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l.o.l these are actually mind as well.... I would rather pen short than long for some reason.... l.o.l figure that one... thanks for the support
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oh but you love long!!!
Juls
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You start in a system of negatives. Yet there is a feeling of longing and desire that hides in the language that pulls the reader on to the next line hoping to find resolution.
Then the poem opens up. you tell me, the reader strongly what you have received and I think it is a spiritual gift. The open spacing makes it feel spread across a period of time, perhaps hours or days but not minutes. The affirmation of your own personal power and space make it become strongly self affirming.
"forever" such a big word in two syllables. The journey begins. The last line has many possible descriptions, many possible thoughts from the most infantile to the most deep philosophical or spritual. The sense of hope, genuine desire perhaps, even a certain madness echoes for me.
I like this. Not because it is deep, but because it express the vibrancy and dynamic of a human spirit. Very much so...
Love, Tom B.
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I thankyou Sir Tomis for your kind words of wisdom & loyal support. This means a lot coming from such a great poet as you... Be safe friend
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Thanks *hug*.
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you hear the whispers
home soon to play
Juls
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see you soon sis XXX
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oh very..
sweet! such a lovely and postive write! I really love this write my friend!!
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thanks Swan, sitting on the grass near the river when I did this....
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That's a nice lift on a cold, wet, crappy morning! Only thing- I think smelt relates to metallurgy- I know, I'm an a** pain! Loved the write!
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there you go I changed it. Wasn't happy when I did it, the brain is a bit slow... l.o.l thanks for the comments... learning all the time...
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Suzi - This is lovely!! I really like the spacing. I see that "now" and "forever" can be the end of the line before and the line afterward simultaneously. Very clever! However, but and scent are more problematic.LOL
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Why Bruce?
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LOL...
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girl everyone has their angel.. beautiful
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we do, we just neek to listen a bit more to what they tell us....
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