You're so close
Yet so far away
What makes me miss you
So much today?
My love for you
How it has grown
Like seeds soaked with dew
Of the morrow's morn
Today was here
And now is gone
Swift as a deer
Now we lay as one
A single sigh
Uttered from our lips
A gentle good-night
In this peaceful bliss
Author notes
first two lines woke my muse up, and I really like those. Don't really know what happened to the rest of the poem haha, but the last stanza turned out OK. I know the stanzas don't really seem to flow into one another very well, but this is from the heart, my love... my LordDeMarco.
A contest entry
- round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1583 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Very Sweet
My love, Thank you! I always enjoy the tranquility feeling I get from reading you poetry. Ah yes, the good days where we are able to just curl up and sleep. holding each other through the night.
As it says in black ink on my leg
"Dawn + Joe 4 ever(08), & ever(09), & ever(10), & Ever(11) & ever (Infinity) & Ever!"
God Bless you my love always and forever and ever!
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