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A face for the world to see




The Earth glows within her crystal eyes
which will always flow beyond the lies,
and skin so untouched it knows when to hide.
This a face like no other; a humans pride.


As the day's old blood dries upon her lips
she speaks a truth for those who have no scripts,
and the melody of her voice reaches a volume of grips.
This is the world we live in; where black days are called an eclipse.



A life has become stained
not by a physical touch,
but through an emotional wretched.

We have done this to our children

a horror like none we've seen before -

life that knows not what life was supposed to be.

Author notes

When innocent eyes bear
an unthinkable act or behavior
they know something is not right
and they are forever marked.


The girl in the photo is really beautiful and melancholy. This is the result of seeing it.


nothing more then 30 lines please.
Nothing less then 10.

A contest entry

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  • Angelflower
    January 13, 2009

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    bravo! this was such a powerful write! I love the flow and emotion here behind your words, you really did such a wonderful job, thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • Kathrin
    January 7, 2009
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    wow

    this blew me away totally, what a thought prevoking thoroughly heart wrenching write