Senses sigh into motion.
Moments of awakening
Escort me to the table,
Lips longing to caress
Love, spread out on a platter
Author notes
'I understand that I am up against formidable opposition, and thereby with reason quote, 'That I could ask why this poem was deleted, but I won't
A contest entry
- An Acrostic of the Five + Sixth Senses by Titus.
700 points, ended January 23, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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mm, I can smell the aroma from the platter. Escort me to the table.
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Very nice!
I enjoyed the angle you took on the sense of smell and see a clever double meaning here. Shame about the contest, but still, you now have a new poem inspired by the prompt which is really good...alby
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I liked this quite a lot, didn't even notice the acrostic at first! For me that means it is a good poem!
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