Remember when I was happy?
Me singing with a smiling face...
It seems so far away,
Those memories seem to be misplaced.
Its hard to remember,
maybe you can help me,
to see what you see,
Beautiful Clairvoyance.
Push those good memories back into focus
If by magic the works of the words would help, simply hocus pocus.
But We're falling into the end,
as we learn to be great again.
Flies buzzing around my ears
Causing annoyance,
maybe that bug is trying to help.
Beautiful Clairvoyance.
Writing all these letters all alone
waiting for you to come back home.
so sorry for the nightmares I may or may not have caused,
I'm sorry for all these questions, I'm sorry that I'm flawed
Beautiful Clairvoyance, Just... Come... Home...
As the sky turns gray and the clouds moving fast,
there's no way to relax, without some memory of my past.
Life's sour tart candy way to much for me.
So I spit it out and wait to try it another day.
It's killing me that your not here
but it's probably killing you more.
just don't trip over my body,
as I lye dead on the floor.
Do you still love me the same
Do you still fill the same.
I look at all the others.
I'm just sorry that your not here to play the game.
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes Galore/no gold yet by piccola.
400 points, ended January 19, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If true happiness comes from true love by fairytalelovestory.
602 points, ended February 3, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mixed Emotions by hotchocolate.
700 points, ended February 9, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Love the ending of this and a good piece this is! Thank you for your entry and good luck
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"im just sorry that youre not here to play the game".... this was great!
i enjoyed this very much! good luck with your contests!
ps i love all your backgrounds =D
hugggggggglezz,
adria <3
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ty for entering gl
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I can't read this because of the background; if you want to change it you may.
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What I could figure out was a nice write, however I was really distracted by the background and found the poem much to difficult to read. And I believe the 3rd last line should be feel and not fill. Sorry if this sounds too negative, I wish youthe best of luck in the contest.
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And sorry if I gave you the impression that it was my contest... it isn't I was just interested in participating and I check out the other poems in the contest sometimes.
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wow you are very right about our writing styles being so close! very good I like it...btw I love the song thanks for the great suggestion!
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