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Deathly Abode

The dead built empires with string,
untied rainbows and unbound the sky
to build a colony

where they keep their bones.

The forgotten children in
the dark side of the womb
hiss, pulling God
into their angry mouths

and eating the universe

They are the spawns of this civilization,
a devil's sandbox, maggot's Elysium

built with glory's desecrated strings.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 8

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    A wonderful dark take on the prompt...very creative with strong imagery and metaphor...truly excellent...

    thank you for sharing...

    mystic


  • maralisa silver member
    January 7
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    a great take on the promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • badnovocaine
    January 7

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    Your writes fascinate and captivates my attention.
    I am so glad I clicked and read one of your poems, because I really liked this one. I think I am going to comment more.
    Kudos
    You should enter my contest!!