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House on the Hill.

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Step soft, my dear child
to the house on the hill
hold tight to my hand
as you bow to my will.

Stumble not, my dear child
just a few paces more
in my hand is the key
that will open the door.

You are cold, my dear child
worry not, it will pass
just a touch of the knife
as I whisper, alas.

Sleep well, my dear child
your torment is through
I must seek out the others
who will die just as you.



                   

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Option 10.
Picture Prompt.

Black Narcissus.

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 7

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    Dark indeed. But good write, you did a great job with the prompt. Great flow and imagery! Good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina

  • wow you are in a dark phase of writing at the moment! An amazing take on the picture and expertly penned.
    Best wishes with this.
    Gaylene