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Full Moon Night

The thrill of the chase,
The smell of the hunt,
The glint in the moon,
My prey to confront,

The feel of the forest floor,
Racing beneath my feet,
Blood pumping through my body,
Dinner sensing defeat,

Earthbound moon,
Hangs low over precarious cliff,
Howling sweet symphonies,
My body shudders stiff,

Fur that bristles,
Body to shake,
Eyes-a-glinting,
My food does quake,

Softened brush,
I lay down my head,
Soft fur sleep silently,
In my earthen bed.

By Errin Hellingrath

7-1-09

Author notes

um i think i have lost my muse what do you guys think?

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  • Really wonderful - it makes me wish I was a wolf or one of my dogs to experience it


  • violinbunny
    January 9
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    Nice piece


  • LilEmoPrincess
    January 7

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    I love it it portrays te pictuer well you need to put Wolves in ur authers notes tho