Authentic
connections
so often lost
among the wires
and in reflections
of pale screens
Love abounds
when mirrored
off the glass
of a neutral
computer
monitor
Hearts coated
black with
ash from
firewall
burns
Crimson lines
hurt none
the less
when
the
thorns
of the
rose
were
only
dead
black
and white
lights
Miscommunication freezes
bleeding tears turned to ice
as the system crashes and
you might just need a new
hard drive....
Author notes
wordbank:
Heart
rose
bleeding
crimson
black
love
mirror
glass
ice
pale
tried to use them in a weirder way... sorry if the change wasn't expected
A contest entry
- picture contest or do a background i love commenting on them or your favorite prewrite by serenity silvermoon.
1100 points, ended January 11, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
not my typical write, but do you like it?
Comments
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I like this poem...
Very interesting
Your word bank with all of that you wrote this.
I love it!
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Hahaha.... I came online to tell you that my computer has a virus that wont let me get onto any of my email accounts. (Hence the reason for sustained computer silence)
This is honestly one of the most Beautiful/interesting things I've read in a long time... it kind of leaves a little bit of a sting in my heart....
posting new
might interest
you
>.<
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Thanks... It's always nice to hear you enjoyed something...
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lol i wasn't exspecting anyone with this word bank to write a poem about computer i guess thats what makes this poem and you unic my one computer at my mom house crashed hard we dont know what happend to the computer thanks for sharing and join my contest you have wrote one of the most different ideas of this word bank i have ever seened great job i like that
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