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Splashes of Sunlight

Sunlight splashes through the trees
Dancing over us as we run
Where we go matters not
Pushing onward in excitment
And our feet seem to never touch the ground

Suddenly the trees seperate
And we tumble in the grass, you and I
Laughing, young and carefree
Breathing in the fresh air
Resting in the softness of the earth in spring

As you lie sleeping
I breathe a silent prayer
"Please God, Please let this last"

Author notes

Yeah so this one is interesting considering the others I just wrote. The prayer should read "I wish this were real because it's not" lol.

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  • individuality gold member
    April 14

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    a good piece of poetry, smiles of love running through poetry's garden, let the light shine bright.


  • rbruce gold member
    February 24

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    Oh dear !! You write of a youth I have long ago left behind, I would love it to be real. The boundless energy of youth immortalised forever.

    • crosscountry07
      February 24
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      Thank you so much for the comment! If only it could last forever... God Bless! -Liz

  • aww

    I love poems like this. But sometimes, the things that we want most never last. amazing write. keep up the great work.