I want him
now
Not tomorrow
now
How can I get him
now?
How do I get Him?
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brings back some thoughts sis when you want some one now it is better that the hit the road in most cases keep doing well
love your bro rev papa
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Call his name
Some writes are better left unexplained. This short and wonderful work had all the makings of a very dramatic call to a lover... then I read the bird explanation...sigh...can I still pretend that it was a love poem?
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Nice way of showing your frustration and feelings for him.
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very well written i loved this poem it was short and sweet and right to the point you did a great job on this poem keep up the great work it is also sad in a way cant exsplain that part still in my sleep thanks for sharing and i love you
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Hi sweet serenity
The baby is a darling! thank you for commenting on my poem here, My bird flew out of her cage, she was up in a tree, I could not get her that night or day, she finally flew away and well that was the end of my bird... I do hope she made it to some sort of safety.... Thanks again and I love you too! Your Fairy God Mother.
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