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The Intricacies of Live - (The Condensed Version)

I some time wonder if life is just a web
with intricate sophisticated traps that
waits for the unwary to prey upon
Then I reminisce of all the possibilities
that was placed in my path as I made
my choices and I look forward to the
challenges of what is to come

Author notes

Picture Prompt 40 to 60 words

Once I looked upon the picture prompt my muse took over and before I knew it I had written a complete poem; but within the confines of the rules 40-60 words I enter this condensed version into the contest. If you get a chance please check out the complete poem http://allpoetry.com/poem/4931543 . Thank you and God Bless, Jo-Ann

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 8

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    I do believe you are right...we do have a choice though on the webs we weave or walk through in this life...lovely in meaning and thought provoking...

    thank you for sharing...

    mystic


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 8
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      Thank you for taking the time to comment. My friend I would be honored to hear your opinion of the completed version of this poem found in the AN. Thank you and God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • maralisa silver member
    January 7
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    a beautiful take onthe promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa


    • smonte19124 gold member
      January 7
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      Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and for leaving a comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann