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she is beautiful (gold)

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I caught her shadow in Autumn
camouflaged in amber
grappling at elusive strands of sanity

I wished to wrap her in December
where summer could warm her heart
and remind her of beauty
waiting at her fingertips

yet she was quite content
to live in obscurity

while she was caught in Autumn… 
            

           I longed to see her flourish in Spring



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40-60 words

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For the most beautiful Gaylene (Aliceinpoetryland)

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  • Ah..you have summed up everything around this..and made me complete to know the secret of this life..wonderful penning my friend...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 9
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    Congrates On The Gold!

    Excellent Write!


  • LionessK silver member
    January 9
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    absolutely gorgeous


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 8

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    How wonderful! Lovely soft imagery that has a sad longing to it...this is amazingly touching and beautiful...

    thank you for sharing!

    mystic

  • This is absolutely stunning. I was completely captivated by your words. Well done sweet sister and much love and light to you... x Lavender Butterfly


  • maralisa silver member
    January 7

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    aw wow this a brilliant take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 7

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    Beautiful ~

    It is very sweet of you to do this for Gaylene, I see she loves this and why wouldn't she

    Wonderful and deeply penned
    Best of Luck darlin

    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda

  • Oh this is just beautiful. How very thoughtful and precious. Thank you so much.
    My very best wishes to you with this and I am bookmarking
    Gaylene

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