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Nature's Elements

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Nature’s Elements~

 

Beauty bestows within a spin,

soft winds whirl a whispering sigh

as human eyes are hypnotized,

this weaver traces on a whim.

 

Cradle lightly, my soul in leaf,

spiritual shelter's where I roam

webs divine, between split twigs sown,

still faithless fear their unbelief.

 

Breath's desire of nature's plea,

slowly inspired from heaven,

once again, you cleanse my soul's sin.

 

Gracefully...

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  • Risikia
    October 21
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    wow....just amazing you have some amazing talent ^^


  • Kathrin silver member
    August 6
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    perfection

    this is absolutly perfect, what a beautiful piece of writing, you truly have a gift my friend xx


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    June 24

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    Beautiful, just perfect, you write from the soul and heart, and do it so well, so poetic ...its gonna be so hard for me to pick a favorite, guess I'll have them all!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 10

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    this is so why you are my favorite writer. i will one day be able to buy your book but you must autograph it for me when i can. great write. viyanna rosemarie


  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    May 9

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    This was very beautifully written and well said, I see you won a silver congratulations on that. thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.


  • Raivyn
    March 14
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    -Sighs contently-

    Brilliant piece of writing.


  • scarletphoenix86
    March 3

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    beautiful poem! It reminds me of something maybe cupid would leave behind to two lovers, if he may leave behind a poem.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 2

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    Beautifully written as always. Very talented and gifted soul you are. Your words always make me feel at peace with nature and with myself. Thanks for sharing.


  • Serenity-words
    January 27

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    Wow

    Very good poem. I've just been reading through your work, your very talented. Just thought I'd give my remarks.
    Wonderful work


  • queenie
    January 18

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    well all i can say is the first place winner must have had a helluva write to top this. i would still be looking at the picyure trying to figure it out. but not you. you owned that picture. it bowed to your pen. the words were just waying at the tip of your pen. this is what makes you a poetic genius. congrats


  • Blue Rew silver member
    January 14

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    A glistening gift to ponder and to relate closely to life's crossroads of faith and disillusionment.
    "webs divine, between split twigs sown,
    still faithless fear their unbelief" really captured me and focuses the principal of the write.
    Finding those connecting lines between all that has failed you is difficult at best, impossible in the dark nights. Webs hold such strong meaning for me. I adore their use here as metaphor to faith and the rhyming form echoes their beautiful patterns well. Blue


  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 9

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    Beautiful take on the prompt. Your words are beyond gorgeous and I really felt the soft wind. Congratulations on your winning a silver trophy.


  • Introvert2006
    January 8
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    Excellent Write, Brilliant!


  • weaverwonderland
    January 8

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    A beautiful description of God's love!!!! Once again you cleanse my soul's sin!!!
    Dad Weaver


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 8

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    Beautiful flow and imagery...so soft and true to the walk of life as the webs we weave and the ones we wander through...nicely done...

    thank you for sharing!

    mystic


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 8

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    Lovely write for the picture! The rhyme is subtle and gorgeous!


  • maralisa silver member
    January 7

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    aw a wonderful poem I loved this your imagery and flow is so stunningly beautiful good luck inthe contestmaralisa

  • DonutNinja
    January 7

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    This is cool

    very poetic and well writtin.one of the better poems ive read in a while. it was a pleasure,awsome write


  • Mariana gold member
    January 7

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    This poem reveals the fragility and strength of a spider's web...encapsulating moments in nature...as if holding on to a lover. Very beautiful

    Mariana


  • echo-ink
    January 7

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    Amazing "spin" on the picture prompt, and I like how you spun faith into the web.
    The metaphor in this was excellent, and this is a top notch write.
    just beautifully done, with a lot of forethought and insight.
    BRAVO!!!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    January 7

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    Wow Bro this is amazing, I love your imagery in this, The power of your words is immense darling
    "Breath's desire of nature's plea,
    slowly inspired from heaven,
    once again, you cleanse my soul's sin."
    thats my favorite stanza
    all my love
    kitty xxx


  • PurpleSky
    January 7

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    Awwww

    this was just so peaceful and has a wonderful feel to it. I love the first stanza the most and the imagry that it creates. awsome write once again
    ~Lena~


  • Ithica silver member
    January 7

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    This is really gorgeous!!! There is nothing better than nature's handi-work to refresh a faltering spirit. Who could have doubt as they witness such glory? This is a blesssing!!!

  • oldpoets
    January 7

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    With a few words of grace and beaquty you have weaved a testimony to the glory of nature. This is very well penned.


  • Justmenow
    January 7

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    wow amazing this is great, so powerful in the writing and best of luck in the contest, great writing, i love the strong feel of it that flows through everything


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 7
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  • Intricate Wordsmith
    January 7

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    Very nice take on the prompt! You didn't go into much detail but in this case it worked out well and maybe better because the subject that causes the "faithless [to] fear unbelief" is left for the reader to decide. Brava! Great work (as usual)!


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 7

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    Wonderful take on the prompt
    Your words are soft and everything just flowed like honey
    Well done and all the best In the contest


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 7

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    such a magical write my dearest rainbow as the webbing of life encases our hopes to be renewwed and awakened with a gracefilled spirit. I loved it and I love you!!! well done and many blessings always xxxx


  • Angelflower
    January 7

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    this was graceful and beautifully crafted.. You really did such a wonderful job with that prompt! had beautiful flow and the imagery was so vivid, late or not you did an amazing job! Best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 7

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    I like this lil write from ya bro. it has so much strength truth and beauty through out it. what I also really liked too was the whole entire fact of whatcha came up with these unique methaphorical phrases made it come alive evn more. anyways a brilliant prompt contest/pic and the very best of luck in the contest.


  • Antipodi
    January 7
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    What wonderful metaphoric description in verse and so delicate just like the silken web


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 7

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    oh this is lovely

    gently weaved with the creative words that you spin...i can hear this being recited in a poetry
    gathering! you should try it once ..it is fun..
    Linda


  • Rheea gold member
    January 7
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    Soft in nature , how you do the things you do..


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 7

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    You spin gracefully in this write of inspiration from this picture prompt! All one could envision as the master weaver spins between branches you have put to paper here....Majestic choice of words and imagery here....A quiet wonder of a penning! Most Brilliantly done!

  • weaverwonderland
    January 7
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    Beautiful!!!!!!!

    Soft and filled with insight, my dear son, you pen with all you are, and what you long for. A wonderful take on the prompt, as you gave it your own unique voice in a whisper.

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