Scar tissue
covers hollow soul
no light permitted
darkness prevails
dust for tears
fixed face
displays deep despair
broken beyond repair
In a list
Can you feel this, see this, ???
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What can I say, except fantastic as usual!!!!!!!!! I've missed you!!!! I'll be reading more of your new stuff soon. I have very little time left now at the end of a day... I love your work, but you already know that!!!!!!
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a good poem, i think we all need to buy some superglue and keep it in the back pocket for mad times.
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This poem is a perfect match for the picture~ Excellent imagery and Can you feel this??...yes! Awesome work, keep your pen scrolling! My pleasure to read
~Tia
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I've been studying Herbalism and there's an amazing plant God gave us called Comfrey (or Knitbone).
I use it a lot to make ointment and drink it as tea. I'm growing some in my garden.
It's like a message from God because it splits cells so renews and heals bone and tissue. It's healing my back rapidly, has healed a friend's slipped disc, is healing my ingrowing toenail and more.
God can make us new, even our bodies!
A moving write.
Peace Georgia
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This is the cold breath of reality. I work for the Department of Veterans Affairs in Anchorage where I see all sorts of burn patients almost every day.
I am a military veteran myself but with little wrong with me, other than I'm a bit crazy, but I do sympathize with these words which touched me.
Sincerely,
MJ.
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hi whoochi long time no see my friend, this is a sad write that touches me deeply, keep up the good work and remember when somethings get broken beyond repair the best thing to do is to start afresh and build up a new one, this applies to most things in life including our lifes
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Oft times the past has a way of remaining present, haunting our need to find joy in the midst of sorrow. I read a scripture in Ecclesiastics that said we grow stronger because of our sorrows. I know within my heart that you have overcome some high mountains. Keep moving forward dear heart. Only look back and realize from whence you came.
Excellent work with such few words. I was missing you dear lady! Glad to see you back, and writing.
Always ♥
Renee
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Hey Whoochi..
I am so glad to visit you just now...
I see the scars, I feel the despair...
but we are only getting stronger and stronger everytime we remove the dust wit a tissue from our tears...
... we nurses are strong...
filled with emotions but strong...
Hope your 2009 will be filled with love, love and more love
XXJeannette
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So glad to read something of you again!
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There's the Julie I treasure
Julie, Sooo happy to have your Muse out of hybernation. Please keep on writing and sharing with me. You, my friend and my ......, will never be broken beyond repair. You are too strong and so loved by many.
Love, "Hef"..(your personal repairman)
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Julie....... where have you been???
you have been missed. so very much.
touching your words...
Love, Lane
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This can be aplied to so many things. Yes, trauma of experience can linger for some time. I'm sure what ever it is, you have the power to get through... heal yourself whole
Great write
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"Scar tissue/covers hollow soul" I know the sound of empty on a black hole night. But as deep as the pain of the past and how it runs against your soul like a bad skin graph, the soul is never empty nor without the Light within it. We sometimes can not hear it over the sound of our own pain.
"no light permited/darkness prevails" first, technical note: mildly redundant, second, personal note: the darkness always prevails from the outside when we cut ourselves away from all that love us. But the darkness is only noticible because of the Light that waits to be seen within. How else do you think you have survived all of your struggles or holding up at all with the one you are in.
"dust for tears/fixed face/displays deep dispair" Oh the space where pain seems to win and all you have is the body your in and it is numb, beyond all that you might desire for safety. Still you wear a face that says i am beyond saving. So it is still a flag waving saying I am here. I know. You know, and so does the Higher Power who waits for us to take ownership of our lives and accept that we must feel grief if we are to enjoy a laugh.
"broken beyond repair" who says? Oh, you do. But, I know, from to many moments, that we will repair unless we refuse to when it is any emotional pain. I would of course help you up if you fell down, hold you if you needed arms around, but I also will sit you on both feet and tell you to do what you need, no enabling.
True gifts multiply in the sharing. You have so many and have touched all of deeply. If this poem is a visit to a past moment then I am glad you got pass. If this is a reflection of the present, then, this too shall pass. Regardless, I hold you in my heart. You have my prayers. You also have my support in everything you do. I will always help in anyway I can.
Love, Tom B.
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Wonderful to read your words no matter the content. I have missed reading you,my friend. I know your heart and soul and my prayers are always with you. Looking forward to a nice long talk... I really have missed you..
Nor
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I agree with everyone who has said WOW and great to hear from you
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Wow. Long time no read, where you been. Definitely worth the wait though. Excellent.
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I'm feelin this write! It's been a while since I've seen you on so it's good to see your penn flowin sis!
peace and love
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I also empathise with broken beyond repair, its so sad that this happens, well written and good luck in the contest, take care kathrin xx -
wow! written with such power... i know how this feels. i especially like the last line "broken beyond repair." excellent write
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Wow,
I'm so sad when my friends are sad, and know that you are not alone, you have so many that adore you on ap, as well as so many that have been through painful pathways of deep despair.. I for one feel this way often..but many say I have no reason..But sometimes you can feel alone in a crowded room, and darkness when the lights are on. I hope you pull through, I'm pulling for ya. Peace one can only pray...
-Timothy.
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makes me want to grab a tool box and prove you wrong, but life is never what we hoped it is just what it is in need of band aids.
welcome back lovely lady
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Wow, such a sad yet, wonderful thought
for this picture! Well done and thanks a lot
for sharing it with us all. It's great to read
you again. Take care my friend!
Jeremy0826
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Powerful write..you find the words that create the strongest images. Piece is heartbreaking..Just remember..not broken beyond repair...just remanufactured. This is a piece I can relate to within myself...may your ink forever flow
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