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A sign of God~

Seek not your joy
thinking you can see
through this woman

Her dark eyes and long lashes
have long healed some sickened hearts
who were falsely unaware
of this sweet breath of life

A mystery in the morn, she is
with compassion so supreme
a rare fruit..
that feeds the starving souls

A woman of pride
as the pride of the sun
a desert flower..
for the seeker's eye

A heavenly breeze
from swaying hips
carrying joy in her steps
to the golden sands



A sign of God full of love and grace
to every empty heart~




Author notes

Anyone who says he can see through women is missing a lot.
Groucho Marx

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 6

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    This is the work of an angel. Her spirit roams free throughout the Universe, touching, releasing the power of Love, healing and enhancing souls. Your words make me grateful that God made me a woman. Lovely work. Congrats on earning the Silver Cup. Your poem is well worth the merit it received.




    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Titus gold member
    September 9
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    I think someone has just inspired me to write Asha's first day in the asytum. Oh, If only I had composed this piece. Sometimes, we are inspired by the routine of it all, being abused in what we do, that no appreciation these days is given. Lovely, lovely, lovely piece.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    July 24
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    Wow. This is so beautiful. Incredibly sweet and sad and hopeful all at once. Congratulations on the much deserved silver trophy. Beautiful.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • I like the divine descriptions in this write, its so
    soft as well as inviting..beautifully written!
    Congrats on the win

  • Titus gold member
    April 30

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    No know I only see purity from you, and this I feel proves that. A beautiful feel of words you've given. Tony


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    February 7

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    nice

    A great description of you my dear friend. hugssssssss As always your writing is amazing. I miss your writing my dear friend, Mark

  • Bruce silver member
    January 16

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    I LOVED the Marx quote in your notes! Also some nice language: a rare fruit..
    that feeds the starving souls
    Well done!


  • Cannonsfire
    January 12

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    This almost reminds me of what you hear whispered about moslems, how we seek to put them into baskets and label them with the tragic events this world sees. How unfair it is and how beautiful a people they are, spoiled only by a few yet we are ignorant to them all. I love the strength and beauty in this, it's beautiful. C


  • penman gold member
    January 10
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Bob Fox
    January 9

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    Poet

    Perhaps Isis has rosen up again smiling now I would think. The goddess of love enjoying a poet words. Oh the Sepirothic Tree of life springs eternal.

    • Amarige
      January 9

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      Thank you Bob for your wonderful comment, you made me smile..
      Amarige


  • Littlefire
    January 8
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    "a heavenly breeze from swaying hips"

    that is great, it is a very nice read, keep on writing those wonderful words...


  • Kathrin silver member
    January 8

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    perfect

    you have nailed it here with this all of the comments below are right it is a very very beautiful write take care and best of luck in the contest kathrin x

  • Well done!

  • Wonderful...

    Only a women can understand the true depth of her soul.

    Great picture -

    Lo-Amo!

    Salute!!!

  • michaeline
    January 7

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    Beutiful backround and the words are so true.You did a great job with this poem and I hope that you win.The echo of the words should be heard by all I think.Have you ever been published if not you should be.


  • Gods child40 silver member
    January 7
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    very beautiful


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 7
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    GOODNESS

    Shorty, this is absolutely beautiful!
    two thumbs up lady!

    • Amarige
      January 7
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      Thanks shorty'eeeeeeeeer' lol..How are you Rich? Send me the link to your book..didn't get it yet..


  • thepoetssoul
    January 6

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    This is a beautiful piece of poetry.
    The imagery is so soft and vivid.
    I like the usage of the desert flower.
    You describe this woman brilliantly.
    thanks for sharing your poetic talent.

    Tony


  • bluestoneangel
    January 6
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    nice write!

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