I got you this here present,
And don't mind the blood,
Because this here present,
Is too good for even you to pass up.
Now remember that guy who hit on you?
The one who stole your stuff?
Will I found out who he was,
And made him fess up.
So as he cried, begged and pleaded,
I told him it was time,
And made him start bleedin'.
What an awesome, grand time.
And when he stopped breathing,
And was no more,
I took both his hands,
And remember that present I mentioned before?
Happy Birthday,
Here's your present,
I've got tons more.
Author notes
So yeah, wrote this about a bloody present. Uhm...enjoy. Oh, and...it's Prompt 10.
A contest entry
- Dark picture prompt by desiredpain.
1075 points, ended January 10, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Haha...what a birthday.
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Yikes! You are a true friend! LOL!
Great work with this scary photo here
and good luck to you with it!
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Wow
Talk about a friend who really backs you up. Well done.
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lol... you can be my friend!
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Hahaha
Thanks? Lol...I think I understood that. Hehe.
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*1st Comment Jiggola*
Haha, wooow, idk why but I find this hilarious! *teehee* Great write for rizzle! Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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Haha
Thank you, I meant it as funny...in that dark kind of way.
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Well that's good, I didn't wanna seem weird er nuthin' _>
*LoLz* It was totally hilarious. I could see someone doing that *ina joking way* *...not real hands*......*just ya kno, stupid prank er sumthin...*
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