Again I hurt
Again I cry
Again I fall
From a mountain of lies
You gained my trust
Built up my hopes
Shattered them with
The very words you spoke
I thought you cared
When you heard me cry
I guess you comforting me
Was just another lie
So now I hurt
And now I cry
You built up my hope
With your pedestal of lies
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A very emotional and strong poem.
I honestly dont think you could do anything to make this better. It reads really well and flows with passion
Mia
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my advice, i love the saying " who do I trust....me" i use this saying everyday. it kind of sux how the world is sometimes, but i always swallow the little pill call pride. and most often that other pill called "fukitol" its kind of like aderrall but....nevermind hehe....but anyways very nice write and thanx for adding me as your fav.
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hmmm i'll tell you this much
trust is easy to earn but hard to gain i don't know if it makes sense but you know what i mean and i know how you feel people say they'll be there for you as long as you live and then turn against you like you were nothing i know how it feels to be in that slump and it's not the best thing in the world but it makes you realize alot of things in the world and with people in general
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I like!!
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great
i am so with you on this one, we believe it cause we love them, gives them a free reighn to say what ever they think we wanna hear, you will live and leran and believe me my friend, no one will get one over on you again take care Kathrin xx
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loved it :]
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nice write
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