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Apt Pupils

 

 

I inhaled pollution stains,

the sweet ambrosia of steal shavings

mixed with secondhand smoke,

as I laughed at the advice

scrawled on billboards

by corporate conglomerates

that don't give a shit about any of us.

 

Yet I'd love to be brainwashed

into another happy clone

a pupil of society,

and spend my day praising

the Almighty dollar.

Maybe then

I wouldn't be so critical of everything;

 

the karma for my humanity,

being the one to place the blame.

 

It's curious

how we all strive to be happy pigs

and expel our sorry knowledge

to the recesses of our minds

since it is so much easier

than to stand up and fight.

 

When the world starts burning books

I won't be suprised.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Image by paperboogie at deviantart.com

All the words in red are from the word bank.

Dedicated to Viacom, you money grabbing soulless bitches. Go choke.

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  • UncleDunk gold member
    October 19, 2009

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    Quite a bite - you snarled and snapped - The frustration and the sad lament for greed and closed-eyed living should not have left me feeling so invigorated by this poem. Never-the-less, it fired me up.

    They already are burning books.
    They never stopped.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 24, 2009

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    wow, this is amazing, omg, i love yours too! hehe
    Stephanie ♥
    p.s. i hope we get on the same boot camp and group during the ap x factor rounds


  • Laura Lamarca
    February 23, 2009
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    Yes.


  • Bosky
    February 22, 2009
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    yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss


  • traffic light gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    Yes

    Actually, this is one of my favorite so far.
    There's an important message here, and you've nailed the imagery.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 12, 2009
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    very well done

    excellent in all aspects, I have nothing to add


  • AmberBambi
    January 8, 2009

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    I really like this poem. The cynical truthfulness and the imagery go together perfectly. My favorite part is the first stanza. It really grabs the reader and sets the stage for the rest of the poem. And nice use of those words by the way.

  • Bosky
    January 7, 2009
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    oh my goodness. So well thought out and written.

    ditto ditto ditto.

  • Zarokk666
    January 7, 2009

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    I agree with you on this one my friend
    this poem is absolutely excellent

    keep up the good work


  • Mariana
    January 7, 2009

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    Hear Hear!!...I second these emotions. Books are so precious. They say ignorance is bliss and I believe it to be true. Whilst I have an insatiable quest for knowledge...I know it leaves me wishing I didn't know some of the things I have learnt. Bravo! This is another powerful write you have penned.

    Mariana

  • dx d by me
    January 7, 2009

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    Potent social commentary..."Its curious how we strive to be happy pigs" I love the imagery, what agreat line!!! Geo


  • Justmenow
    January 7, 2009

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    'Yet I'd love to be brainwashed' what a powerful line and this is such a powerful poem wrought with emotion and hatred of society and what everyone is becoming, a poem to make everyone sit up and think, well done.


  • Kathrin
    January 7, 2009
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    great

    thought provoking and meaningful. well done take care kathrin xx

  • Libra Moon
    January 7, 2009

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    What a brilliant poem. I am thuroughly impressed. Those last two lines are really killer. We never learn from our mistakes, and keep spreading ignorance.

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