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Party Time

Shards of balloons and
Strands of streamers
Strewed the floor
Remnants of the party
The night before
We trudge disconsolate
Begrudge the coming
Of the new day’s dawn
Clearing heads thick
With hangover from
Last night’s airy bubbles
A fairy crunches underfoot
Silver baubles slither hither
And thither kicked aimlessly
Around the room
Sight of uneaten vol-au-vents
Unappealing as last night’s curry
Stirs a slight queasiness
Coffee only is contemplated
Clearing up and out
Is the only timetable
You had to be there
Or be rectangular
Redress optional
Fun is done
The end

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  • callman
    November 23, 2009
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    An excellent observation of how I don't want this years new years eve party to end. I have a headache already.

    • Frank E Gibbard
      November 24, 2009
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      Thanks CALLMAN

      Wow! a comment on Share's big brother, a rare event for moi. Appreciated therefore all the more. Sadly my party days are a fading memory (sobs) thanks again for relating to the subject of me party piece. Frank