I told you that one day
If you kept on breaking my heart
Someone else would come along
And replace those broken parts
So you'll be please to know
You can do anything you want
And go your own way
Because I've now turned the corner
With someone I just met today
I used to think my life would have ended
Without you by my side
Despite all the pain and heart ache
That I always felt inside
Now it seems I don't care as much anymore
Inspite of what you do or say
Because now I'm so happy
With someone I just met today
I used to crave for each smile and kiss
That you gave me now and again
Now it doesn't matter anymore
My life has changed for the better it seems
And when at last I almost sold my soul
An angel heard me as I prayed
Sending me a special someone
Someone, I just met today
Someone, I just met today
A contest entry
- Romantic Co-Write/Rhyme by piccola.
400 points, ended January 11, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nicely done thank you for entering
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It feels a lot more like a song than typical poetry. Interesting.
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Excellent write,
you did a wonderful job you two.
Well done -
You both did a wonderful job with this
poem. Very beautiful and a great reminder
that no matter what is happening in our
relationships, that there is always someone
else out there that will love and support us.
There is always hope and you never know when
and where you will find it. Well done and thanks
a lot for sharing this one here. Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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