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Please me

I do not care if you throw me up against the wall,
kiss me harder, as you rip off clothes, harder.
Bend me over, smack a ripe rich round cheek.
Make me gasp, in pleasure and pain, again.
Tie me up with silk rope, pull my hair it's no joke.
Kiss me, lick me, suck me, tickle, grab, and rub.
I do not care what form of attention,
soft, sweet, rough, fast, or slow.
Show how you love to please me,
show me how your body needs me.

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  • plainoljoe
    April 20
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    only when the female is pleased can she truly give pleasure

    Joe


  • spideracer gold member
    January 27

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    Haven't been here in awhile, and reading this poem I wonder what took me so long to get back here. You certainly haven't lost your touch, gosh your man must be one lucky son of a bitch. Just one typo, first line. ''agen't'' I think you meant ''against''. Overlooking that typo, your poem was an enjoyable read.

    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      January 28
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      Hey thanks for pointing that out, I always over look little stuff like that. I know what I mean lol. So glad to have you back reading. Thank you so much for your comment, and you are so right the man in my life is very lucky and I hope he knows that.

  • Hard and rough...is there any other way? Great write

  • The D O M
    January 7

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    I'd rip away the clothes you wear
    That keep me from your tender skin
    And when the parts I seek were bare
    I know that you will let me in
    Four lips I love in different ways
    But on your cheeks I must begin
    The smacks wet lips in subtle ways
    I know that you will let me in
    I squeeze and tease each tender part
    Until your sighs reveal I win
    The peak you reach will warm my heart
    I know that you will let me in
    I'd rip away the clothes you wear
    I know that you will let me in

  • Bruce silver member
    January 6

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    Nice write. It has an insistent rhythm, and you didn't have to use any crudity to get your point across.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 6
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    I know thats right hon!!!! Good one here


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 6

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    OOOHHH..

    YEAHH!!! mmmmm..yes, been awhile but it's still as good as the first time..


  • bluestoneangel
    January 6
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    I HEAR YA!

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