He's so beautiful,
With his dark chocolate eyes,
which I could melt into.
His caramel colored skin,
contrasting with my milky complexion.
The engagement ring I sent him,
on his left ring finger,
looking as if it were made for him.
His ability to make goosebumps,
run up and down my skin.
His way of always being there for me,
even if he lives hundreds of miles away.
He has a forgiving nature with me,
and is patient and gentle with my emotions,
not playing or weaving lies,
as I did to him for a long time.
Always trying to forgive me for the mistakes,
that I have made in the past.
I love him,
more than anything.
This is why he is special to me,
and why,
my love for him will never end.
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Tell me about the love of your life! No better yet show me better than tell me! Pain me a beutiful picture about what makes him/her so special.
this is written for my wonderful fiance, Mac. hes been with me through alot most of which was my mistakes. I could not exist and function without him beside me.
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Being loved for just being you, is what we all desire...good write...
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awwww very touching love! this is a wounderful ode (sp?) to him! i think it makes anyone feel special when someone else writes a poem just for them!
thanks for entering my contest and good luck,
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Such a beautiful piece. A lovely tribute to your prince charming! ^.^ great job!
♥ Kathraina
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thank you!
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