I never knew about happiness above
I didn’t think dreams came true
I couldn’t believe in love
Until I finally met you
Each thought of you fills me with sweet emotion
I give to you my deep, complete devotion
All my fondest wishes you fulfill
I love you totally, and I always will
I no longer wake up alone, I have you by my side
it fills me with a sense of joy, wholesomeness and pride.
I've woken up to life in a different light,
experiencing things with a new
found confidence,everythings so right.
The beauty of your smile, the way you look in my eyes
I shall keep you till the darkness comes,
till the life within withers and dies.
Author notes
A 2 author piece.
www.allpoetry.com/jade.butterfly The first 2 stanzas
www.allpoetry.com/Troy31 the last 2 stanzas
A contest entry
- Romantic Co-Write/Rhyme by piccola.
400 points, ended January 11, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!
So sweet and beautifully written. I think we all have "that someone" or at least reading this I had my someone in mind that the words/sentiments fit perfectly. Great job capturing the emotion that true love brings! I really enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to reading more.
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This reminds me of a song I sang and wrote for my ex fiance'. This is very sweet and I love it
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What an awesome collab! This is so romantic and sweet! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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this is a beautiful rhyme full of love & heart... good luck
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Wow, Beautiful love poem you two.
Well done. -
this is soo sweet!!! i love this poem. great collab piece!
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