Between the shadows of the rolling thunder,
the wrap of weather whispers wonder
in times of touch,
so soon to swallow,
intrepid lips, the brave might follow.
I have ached for flower,
tethered open wind,
as inclement crystal embracing sunshine,
the unsaid hold of arms,
less traveled,
unraveled wisp of moon's first cusp,
when crescent pours to filling chalice
and yellow weaves through rippled palace,
man and maid
in one firm statement,
this way of Nature's thirsty tempest.
Without the words of too much mindset,
I crave to know you like a candle,
when light might dance away from handle,
until the rush of peace consumes us.
Then you might know that I am holy,
and I, that you are such an angel,
living feathered love,
together,
as we consume our rain soaked splashes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Embrace~ by poet2angels.
700 points, ended January 13, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Two thumbs up
I am absoultely awe struck! This was so beautiful, and it reminds me of a very wonderful kiss in the rain that I will never forget.
"unraveled wisp of moon's first cusp,
when crescent pours to filling chalice
and yellow weaves through rippled palace,"
...there are no words to express how much I love this stanza. I am in love with this poem, and I wish I could find a better way to express that lol. Great great write.
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Remarkable... I am stunned out of words to describe my admiration for such a masterpiece.
Bravo will have to do...
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This is so beautiful!
"I have ached for flower,
feather opened wind,
as inclement crystal embracing sunshine,"
"I crave to know you like a candle,
when light might dance away from handle,
until the rush of peace consumes us."
Just makes one sigh when reading and rush to the arms of a lover in the rain...
GHorgeous
Lynda
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"Then you might know that I am holy"
Anyone who reads your immaculate writing would never doubt it for a second, my Friend. Gorgeous, Scribe. Good luck in Lynda's contest, Sweetie. 
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Winner!
You amaze me, and I ought to know by now I have to be more than inspired a bit to enter any contest you pen in my dear brother. I give credit where credit is due. Bravo on another wonder of you and your spiritual pen within. On another note, I did enter before you, so, it's not totally my fault.
I love ya, peace brother.
-Timothy
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