thoughts from my head are hitting heart
i swear there hitting it so hard
i cry so hard
so hard you can hear my tears hit the floor
people tell me to get over it
i just cant do it
time goes by
yet i still cry
why?
why i scream and cry
the words roll of my toung
i miss you
i miss you i scream
even in my sleep
im so young
i think about our memories
but when i do i cry even in my sleep
PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME!!!!!
i scream
on murky days
you guide me the way
but still i want to see your face
i know your in a better place
every time i think of that
it puts a smile on my face
i sit there
and tresure every memory
the most important to me
still i miss you
even though your gone
but i never wanted you to leave
i wanted you to always stay close to me
Author notes
i was listeng to a song and it touched my heart in lost of ways and heck i imagend me doing all theese things heck i cried
A contest entry
- Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide.
750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
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Great job but you should use spellcheck. A couple of mistakes are okay but there were quite a lot. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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Good job. While I was reading this I thought you had suffered a serious loss, maybe one of your parents, and I was going to console you! You had me believing! Check for typos (tresure, your for you're, and so on). Best of luck!
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dude that reminds minds me of edward leaving bella grrr darn u for bringing that memory back but other then that good jb for ur first poem
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shut ur face u d-bag
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