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001.

There are days in my life
Where I don't understand
There are nights in my life
Where I want it to end

I sit in the quiet and replay my remorse
I hit rewind and open, old sores

I can't take this anymore
It's just too much to bear
Even on those painful nights
It wouldn't matter if he was there

I sit in the quiet, flash backs they race
I just want to leave and get out of this place

My mind is contently bombarded
With thoughts I can't control
I fear for my sanity, my life
And how these emotions take their tole

I sit in the quiet and cry away time
Wishing and hoping it's my turn to die


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  • XxTWLOHAxx
    March 3

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    this has got to a favourite
    very good write
    love the flow of the poem
    it has real feeling to it
    i can relate to this