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Beating heart


I betrayed my thoughts

with his memories,

in other faces I seek his face.

sitting in a cafe-shop

people murmur and see

my loneliness,



Like death as my companion,

I have no life without

his life.

Is like living without

breathing. Of hunger a bird dies,





And I of hunger

die for him. nothing calms this

emptiness, I walk the streets

without touching the ground.



He is the reason for so much pain,

he is the only one to calm

this empty sigh,

my constant yearn, only

he can make it sleep.



I wish to eat the fragrance

of his body. And sleep

my sense on his chest.

he is my yearn and my owner,

Is unbearable to

exist and not be the one to

hold his hand,



To watch him sleep.

Vacio mi Corazon does not have

life because life is a heart

beating each second from love.


CopyrightŠElenaToledo2008

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  • Trupoet
    January 6
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    Can you change my background? pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 6

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    Amazing!

    I love the way you weave here sweet one, and I am please to read a piece that carries that raw emotion as you let it flow like a river of rush, I love you much. Thanks for sharing here, pen on poetess!

    -Timothy