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Falling For You

Two more hours to go.
Well, shit.
I might as well pop another pill
Take another hit.

I feel like I fucked up,
No shit, he wants nothing to do with you.
I just want to become invisible
Maybe then you'll look right through.

I can't tell you I don't love you
Its been a lie each time I've said I don't.
Maybe I'll just slit my wrists, bleed out and die
But then again, maybe I won't.

Maybe I'm just missing the big picture
I'm so god-damn stupid
Its been at least ten years
Since I've stopped believing in cupid.

So even if I admit it,
He's going to leave you
I know that you'd never return the feeling
Just because I asked you to.

Sometimes I want to grab you
You're so pathetic
And scream it to your face
But your presence is an anesthetic.

I can't feel around you
He's just like your cocaine
You're the most amazing, wonderful person
For taking away my pain.

I love you,
God-damn it, don't be a fool
I just want to make things right
I don't want words to turn cruel.

There's a fine line to this relationship
That you're sprinting to cross
Just please, don't leave me.
My breaking heart can't handle the loss.

Author notes

****The speaker's mind talking to him

Another snag with the relationship, and how Tweek tries to deal.

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  • Sir Squigglim
    February 9
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    aw, that's sad!

    Very well done though.


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 7
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    i feel ur words

  • Tweekers
    January 6
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    Ahaha! Thank you so much for your comments, you two!

  • Okay, wow.
    This was...like, epic. All of it, oh my god, it was brilliant. I effing loved this.
    I liked it, the feeling of being so pathetically in love, and trying not to care...Yay. Confetti. Bravo.


  • Darknessbabe
    January 6
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    Intresting

    I like the back and forth with the person and mind. Very good.

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