Tiny ears that flick and shake
Little yawns when it’s awake
Gentle eyes that see so much
Paws that have the quiet touch
Purrs to signal all is well
And show more love than words can tell
A tiny mouth that is small and rough
A breathing bundle of loving fluff
Always gleaming with glowing pride
A calming presence by our side
Whiskers thin as golden hair
Shining bright when you are there
A friendship that will last and grow
No wonder why we love them so!
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes Galore/no gold yet by piccola.
400 points, ended January 19, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me if u liked it!
Comments
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aw..... that cute! I really like this one, it describes a cat purrr-fectly!
Keep writing
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awww that so cute!
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hehe.. i am not much of a cat person, i don't like them may be cause in my place there are so many filthy stray cats they spoil my garden, they sit on my car and leave behind all the dust & hair and don't know what all on it.. they take garbage out mess it all around.. so i don't see them as a very cute and cuddly animal...
leaving me behind you write is very cute..with simple words you captured all the innocent emotions of an animal and bond between them and us.
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awe, this is so cute. I want a kitty to cuddle now :')
thanks so much for entering. I love the simplicity and the beauty of this poem. Thanks.
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What a beautiful poem! I'm a cataholic. I have five cats.
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Oh I love cats, hopefully Jacob does too! Thanks for your entry
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I love cats they are my soft spot anything in nature i have a soft spot for i love this poem I have cats of my own and some paws are not so gentle sometimes lol good write
~GOOD LUCK~
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Very good. Very mature talent. I surely wasn't doing this well at age eleven. Maybe you will be famous. That would be good.
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well, with a little practice i got better. I wish i was famous but i want to be a vetinarian some day.
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awww
good write i have a cat he looks innocent but the minute you have some salmon he rushes like a bulldog at you.kepp the cat work.well done -
This is a beautiful poem and you should be proud. I especially liked the first verse. I had a question: should it be "quiet" or "quit"?
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Very nice. Cats are wonderful pets. I have two.
Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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