Beware of where you step
the world can be deceitful
cover all your tracks
be ready and willing to fight
Author notes
20 Words
Prompt: A little bit of rewritten biblical text:
The serpent may have been subtle but Eve happened to have her high-heels on that day in the garden.
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10-20-30 by Cerulean Sunrise.
575 points, ended January 6, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very well written poem you have here brother you did an alsom job keep it up i will keep on reading this poem has a meaning i am sure but right now i am to tired to know what that is i love you and keep on writing
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Amen brother!!
amazingly true!
becca
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A brilliant message. It shows a lot about life and what it can do to us if we don't watch carefully.
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Is good to the prompt.
I would have looked for a better end though. -
A well spoken thought to take into consideration indeed. This relates well to the prompt and beyond. Good luck in the contest!
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