I
am not, never was
beautiful.
I dizzy between being happy, and being alone - and for some reason I could never find a medium.
He holds me in the highest regard, and mistakes me for being something more than the nothing that I am.
But, it never made me question his brilliance.
All I want to be
is beautiful
All I want to be
is against his chest.
I don't want to fall down anymore, and I fear that he may be running out of band-aids. How many times can one person scrape their knee, and expect for there to be something left?
I never want to stop feeling.
He
is always was
my whole heart.
He's the only one who can make me feel.
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SammyStarxx
A contest entry
- Oh Sweetie; You're so [D-I-R-T-Y] pretty. by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 23, 28 entries
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Comments
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I like it. LOL. I really like the line 'I never want to stop feeling'. Reason is...when people, me expecially, go through heartache they sometimes wish they could feel. And I don't know why but I really love that line. The whole things really good though.
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Beauty is not only on the outside. Sometimes, the most beautiful onthe outside are completely the opposite on the inside. But, i'm sure you knew that. The emotions are deep, i dig that.
Great work, as always
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this is beautiful. It seemed innocent but still at the same time having the undercurrent of intimacy. brilliant!
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I like. The formatting is good, not overdone. I love the emotions and the way they're portrayed. Best of luck!






