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Not, never was

I
am        not, never was
beautiful.

I dizzy between being happy, and being alone - and for some reason I could never find a medium.
He holds me in the highest regard, and mistakes me for being something more than the nothing that I am.
But, it never made me question his brilliance.

All I want to be
              is beautiful
All I want to be
              is against his chest.

I don't want to fall down anymore, and I fear that he may be running out of band-aids. How many times can one person scrape their knee, and expect for there to be something left?
                    I never want to stop feeling.

He
is        always was
my whole heart.
                He's the only one who can make me feel.

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  • I like it. LOL. I really like the line 'I never want to stop feeling'. Reason is...when people, me expecially, go through heartache they sometimes wish they could feel. And I don't know why but I really love that line. The whole things really good though.


  • HaileeDear
    January 7

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    Beauty is not only on the outside. Sometimes, the most beautiful onthe outside are completely the opposite on the inside. But, i'm sure you knew that. The emotions are deep, i dig that.
    Great work, as always


  • Candy Morphine
    January 7

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    this is beautiful. It seemed innocent but still at the same time having the undercurrent of intimacy. brilliant!


  • stylization
    January 6

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    I like. The formatting is good, not overdone. I love the emotions and the way they're portrayed. Best of luck!