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Nothing Else Matters

How can I say this right?
We've talked of this before,
but you know I'm not bright
and that I forget

(You always smiled)

Or so I say, I just love to say
it to you every chance I may.
Baby, nothing else matters,
I wish to grant you the stars,
tell you sorry for everything
I mess up, my heart crying.

I wish upon those stars for your love...

I know I let you down, failing.
But I'm a work in progress
With you I'm not such a mess
Without you, no point in healing
Give me a chance with this thing.

These feelings I have trouble telling...
This isn't a line I am selling...

The love I have with you,
holds me together,
that love without you,
shatters me altogether.

We can fix this like the rest
Just like that lamp you threw
Get us to work again, maybe
this is just another big test.

I can't, won't smother this...

I know the importance,
give me that chance
to show my significance
so beneath stars we may dance!

So we may whisper of Love and that

Nothing Else Matters...

Author notes

I really enjoyed the song and the creation of this modest piece. I even added the song to my myspace music list. Thank you for the music and thoughts, and I hope you enjoy reading this piece as much as I do. -EthariusComplex/Daimon

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  • XxTwigxX
    January 23

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    AWSOME!!!!!!!

    Brilliant my dear, i feel tha deep inside of this piece as if it were my own, or maybe its jus that it goes that deep to me, i kno you are tha type of guy that would soo gop get the stats for a girl if she wanted them, and all of that. i jus hope that this isnt about that one person, i told you already, DONT WAIST YA TIEM ON THAT MESS!!! shes so mot worth even gettin twisted over.

    love you my dar friend,
    untill forever.

    XxTwigxX

    • Daimon Shade
      January 23
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      Hell Nah

      Thanks for the the compliment, my friend, but I assure you it has nothing to do with that one. I am rather over her, and rather sick with the fact that I fell in love with her in the first place. As far as I am concerned, she is worse then my ex Michele. But ANYWAY, I ain't twisted over that one, just twisted on my poor choice in women and my...current single state, but things are picking up. I am glad you enjoyed the poem so, I hope to look more at yours very soon. Hope things are well.

      Truly and Darkly,
      love eternal

      Daimon/ Dirk
      The Doctor will care fer yer needs, ^_~
      P.S. Did you talk to the guardian unites about my potential visit?