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[ Rolling Hills, Running Stream, ]

Rolling Hills, Running Stream,
Rushing Water, Quiet Dream,
Crashing Thunder, Silent Night,
Vissions wakened by the Sight,

Soft in Dew, Bright in Day,
Tender Silence, Chilling Light,
Songs awake in Dreams so Bright,
Silence chills the Bone tonight

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  • Ahkam silver member
    January 7

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    very nice song

    Excellent rhyming, chilling light, tender silence,, thses are some very fine abstracts to make tehimagery more profound,,,very sweet poem, thanks for sharing.