two hearts are torn
but beating still as one
there is no need to mourn
for the flame has just begun
no light has burned so bright
as it has with you
my mind takes flight
in the frosted morning dew
even though we are apart
I still love you so
you will always be in my heart
my love I will bestow
when day turns to night
I'll think of all we had
I know everything will be alright
imagining your smile makes me glad
and even though my heart is torn
I know you still are mine
a new day has been born
when our hearts are intertwine
so we will contuine to beat together
no matter were you are
I will love you forever
even if its from afar
A contest entry
- In the name of love!!! by Sick Sunshine.
600 points, ended February 23, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's All About Love by grammabuff.
900 points, ended February 10, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting approach and looks good on the page - well balanced. One small suggestion: in line twenty, take out "are" and it will read much better. Thanks for entering. Buff
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yes i know... lol
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Oh im sorry! i thought you were System!!
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LOL silly =]
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I see a pattern in your poems.
So far they're about love am I right???
I really did enjoy reading this, it used very beautiful lines.
But wasn't the rule only too enter one write per person???
Thanks again for entering -
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i did only enter one.
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