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I hate me

Why is it that I am the one
When you’re so better
How did you hear my cries
Did you think this pain could be undone

I have a hole in my heart
An open wound
A deepened sore
And the pain is tearing me apart

I am ugly inside and out
I hate who I am
I am covered in scars
And full of so much doubt

I look around and see so much love
You are so good to me
You make me feel whole
But my aches push and shove

I wish I could be free
A little girl
So innocent
I wish I could be any one but me

I try to cover up the pain
Let my insides melt
Kill the feelings
Hide away deep beneath the rain

You didn’t even know
That I was already gone
And broken beyond repair
Sorry boy I must go



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  • Rheea gold member
    February 28
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    you just get better and better.

  • Sorry I just saw which one it was...excellente take on the prompt.

  • It's a great write. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. Could you please let me know which option you chose?