I sit here like a twined rope,
so wrapped up in everything you said.
The conversations and laughs
keep me begging for more
My heart entangled
obsorbed
longing
wanting
aching
craving
something I'll never have.
Because I know the truth.
You love her.
Why do you keep calling to me?
Joking?
Laughing?
Chatting?
When all you do is thrust me deeper
into a trench of desire?
You love her.
Yes, you love her.
You need not me.
So just dispose of me.
I don't know what's worse.
Ignore me? Love me?
My heart and I
don't know what to feel.
Passion? Hatred?
But it doesn't matter
Because you love her.
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Please don't ask. Just comment.
Yup
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Good write. Beautifully created.
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KT, at first I could not put clappy men on, but now i think I can.
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I didn't exactly understand it, but, like you said, I won't ask, I'll just comment. It was a good poem. The suggestion said to add my 'emotional response', so here goes:
I laughed, I cried.
Just kidding. But really, it was a very good poem.
From AJ
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lol AJ
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sounds a little like me. good job
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