sandy pants and feet
are the ocean's gifts to me
where are Neptune's jewels?
Author notes
couldn't help it... had to put a poem in here. lol
A contest entry
- Ocean Haiku poems for Chocolate-eating Peg-leg Pirate Group by Blossom Fairy.
750 points, ended January 6, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES ~~~ Group contest for CHOCOLATE EATING PEG-LEG PIRATE GROUPIES ~~ ONLY! by Girl in Red.
700 points, ended January 22, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If you think this is strange, it is because it is!
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ah by the seaside with sandy pants and feet, neptuen's jewels are in the repair shop i think, a good piece of poetry
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Did Neptune have jewels? That would make sense. He hasn't given any to me either.
Enjoyed your write. Nicely put together with a sense of humour.
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fucking right on.
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Is this Haiku? I love the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
ValkyrieNightWeaver
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Haiku is strictly about nature... and this one has a person in it, so it is senyru.
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Fun and true... really darling!
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A cute poem, short on words but long on thoughts of seafaring adventure.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Well, hahaha you just had to put a poem in here and that is very funny but well... it is fun to join in. lol YAY!
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